After we weren't satisfied with our initial film we decided to come up with a new narrative that would hopefully make more sense.
Based on feedback from our Target audience and teacher, it was clear that the narrative of our film wasnt clear. Therefore we have decided to pick a more current day issue.
The narrative now follows as that our main protagonist Gordon's father has recently died at war in the RAF. He now has an emotion attachment to one of his fathers medals. He wakes up, gets ready and heads out to the funeral which is today. His whole world is twisted upside down, and has literally gone backwards on him, and he notices that on the way to the funeral, there are lot of odd occurrences where people are going backwards. Over watching him is a blue man, in a suit with a black tie, but he never confronts Gordon. Gordon then comes into an alleyway where he starts to hold his medal and look at it thinking deeply. This stresses him out and ends up throwing the medal on the floor, and walks on. The blue man picks up the medal.
The next morning Gordon gets up as usual and goes into the toilet. He looks in the mirror shocked to find he is a young child. He sprints downstairs into the kitchen where he finds another note this time saying 'See you at the game son!'. He turns round and behind him is his father, in a white shirt and black tie, same as the blue man. Gordon leaps onto the father to embrace him.
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You've quite a bit of updating to do here Sam!
ReplyDeleteLuuuurvly :)
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you Sam
ReplyDeletehahaha on the picture but it maybe just needs a tad more detail to make it even better.
ReplyDeleteHi Sam its Joe you should do some kind of editing so that no only he walks backwards etc you have people talking backwards which would be added to the genre of comedy. l
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