Ancillary Text 1 - Magazine Review

One Step Back

Final Cut

This is the final cut of our media production.

New Rough Cut

The new rough cut based on the new ideas and also the audience feedback recieved since is below.


General Feedback that we gained was:
- We still needed to make clear that the father is dead
- Some sounds do not fit e.g. Thump for Shocked little boy, and when dropping medal.
- Father is very quiet

Changes due to Feedback
We will add in a voice over at the beginning and tweek the sound levels of certain parts.

Rough Cut ......

Below is a rough cut of out film, One Step Back.Any comments or criticism is welcome

It is clear to see that certain films have influenced this such as Shaun of the Dead.

Podcast 2

Screenplay

This is the screenplay for our short film:

One Step Back Screen



The original screenplay from before the major changes is below.



One Step Back Screen

Storyboard